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Read A Winter Book ...Write A Winter Poem
A Collaborative Literacy Project
Hosted by Marci McGowan  Winter 2004




Mrs. Centofanti's First Grade
Ben Franklin Elementary School
Shrub Oak, New York

Books: Snow by Uri Shulevitz and
The Polar Express by Chris Van Allsburg

Free Verse Poem

Winter Snow

Winter comes once a year

Now it’s time to have some fun!

Snowflakes falling from the sky,

Sledding down lots of hills,

Making snowballs big and small,

Building snowmen nice and tall.

Oh, what fun, Oh, what fun!

We love winter,

‘Cause it snows,

Having lots of fun with friends,

In the cold, cold winter snow.

So come along and have some fun!

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Mrs. Viviano's First Grade
Ben Franklin Elementary School
Shrub Oak, New York

Book: The Mitten by Jan Brett

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Free Verse Poem

The Mitten

The boy’s grandmother made him white wool mittens.

He went outside to play in the snow.

Everything was covered with snow and one of his

Mittens got lost. A mole saw the mitten and

In he went.

Then a rabbit, a hedgehog, a badger, an owl, a fox and a bear, all squeezed in the mitten.

Then a mouse came and went on top of bear’s nose.

Everyone was forced out of the mitten when the bear sneezed.

Nicki saw his glove up in the air and he ran and caught it.

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Susan Brown's First Grade
Chancellor Charter School
North Lauderdale, Florida

Books: Go To Sleep Little Groundhog

Character Poem

The Baby Groundhog

Looks like a squirrel

Who is happy and playful

That needs to sleep

Is afraid of his own shadow

Wants to dance not hibernate

Dreams of springtime

He and his family went to sleep until Groundhog Day

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Mr. Cook's First Grade
Ben Franklin Elementary School
Shrub Oak, New York

Book: Thomas’ Snow Suit by Robert Munch
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Free Verse Poem

Winter

Winter color,

Is the color of snow.

Winter is very cold,

I love snow!

We go sledding,

In the snow.

We can make a snowman,

And have a snowball fight!

I bake cookies,

When it’s cold.

I drink hot chocolate,

And stay at home

With my Chewy Chips Ahoy

On a chilly, chilly winter day.

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Mrs. Nancy Golubic's 1st Grade 10:30 Group
Market Street School
Boardman, Ohio
Class Website

We read many winter books, including The Snowy Day by Ezra Jack Keats, Flowers for the Snowman by Gerda Scheidl, Snow Day by Lynn Plourde.  We also read Susan Jeffers' beautifully illustrated version of Robert Frost's Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening.

After talking about imagery and painting pictures with our words, we brainstormed for our senses poem. We listed things that we see, hear, feel, smell and taste on winter days. We picked our best images for our poem.  You can see our poem and other winter projects on our Winter Fun webpage.

Sensory Poem

I see . . .
humongous icicles,
slushy streets,
snowy sleeping trees,
falling snowflakes,
snowmen with carrot noses,
heaping mountains of snow.


I hear . . .
winter wind,
feet crunching in the snow,
slushy footsteps,
icicles dripping and shattering,
snowballs hitting windowpanes,
the sound of the lake cracking.

I feel . . .
freezing cold snow,
sharp icicles,
snowflakes on my face,
toasty in my jacket,
numb on my face.

I smell . . .
delicious hot tea and hot chocolate,
smoke from chimneys.

I taste . . .
snowflakes on my tongue,
roasted marshmallows,
tasty hot chocolate,
yummy soup!

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Joan O'Neill's Sp. Ed. Class
Nassau Elementary School
Poughkeepsie, New York
Class Website: Welcome to Kids Are Special

Book: The Snowy Day by Ezra Jack Keats

Today we read the book, The Snowy Day by Ezra Jack Keats. Since it snowed yesterday, (and we had a snow day!) it was the perfect time for this book. It happens to be one of our favorites. We came up with two poems.  We wrote these poems as a whole group. Some of the kids want to write their own poems, too!

Free Verse Poem


SNOW
white, crystals
wet, cold
SNOW


Sensory Poem


SNOW
Looks sparkly
Feels cold
Smells fresh
Sounds crunchy
Tastes Icy
SNOW


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Mrs. Tricia German's First Grade
Sierra Oaks School
Sacramento, CA

Book: The Mitten by Alvin Tressault and other versions

We read many versions of The Mitten - the popular ones by Alvin Tressault and Jan Brett as well as 3 others - a different version for each day of the week!

First we wrote a cinquain about mittens:

Cinquain

Mitten
cozy, fuzzy,
comforting, warming, protecting,
Keep our hands toasty!
Mitten

Then we examined the format for a 5 W poem. This was a new idea for us. Our result varies from the formula but answers questions while posing a question of our own.

5 W Poem Variation

A little boy
gathering wood
lost his mitten
in the snow.
He did not notice
the mitten was gone.
Then he saw a mouse
wearing a red hat!
Was it magic?

Snow is so intrinsically magical to children. Our studies and stories led us to create individual poems using this frame:

Snowflakes
Snowflakes
(adjective) (adjective)
Snowflakes
(action + ing) (action + ing) (action + ing)
Falling to the ground!

All my students were successful in creating a lovely verse but Sara demonstrated what a good ear for poetry she has by only choosing words that began with the same sound.

6-Line Poem

Snowflakes
Snowflakes
frosty, fuzzy
Snowflakes
flittering, flickering, flying
Falling to the ground!

by Sara

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Lisa Dryzal's 1st Grade
East Side Elementary
Johnstown, Pennsylvania
Class Webpage

Books: The Snowy Day by Ezra Jack Keats      
and others listed on our class webpage

We read a variety of winter themed books this month and then wrote Winter Acrostic Poems about what Winter is to us.   You can read all the poems on our class webpage.

Acrostic Poem

Winter Is ...

Wearing a wool jacket,
I cy ponds,
New Snow falling down,
Toasty nights in front of the fire,
Excellent snowmen in the yard,
Riding a sled down a steep hill.  

  

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Mrs. Betz' 1st Grade 
Ben Franklin Elementary School
Shrub Oak, New York

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Our class read the book The Hat by Jan Brett. We wrote a class acrostic poem about details in the story. We also illustrated our favorite part of the book.


The Hat

The girl chased Hedgie
Hedgie is a hedgehog
Every animal ran away with Lisa’s clothes

Hedgie thought the sock was a hat
Animals laughed at Hedgie
The girl found her clothes on all of the
       animals

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Cynthia Wright's 1st Grade
Curtsinger Elementary School
Frisco, Texas

We spent a whole week on winter and snow and discussed different kinds of poetry. We wrote together three poems and then voted on the one to submit to this project. At the end of the week the children thought of a snow theme and created their own acrostic poem. They then decorated a pattern of a child and put snow clothes on them. They look
adorable out in the hall.

Acrostic Poem

Frosty The Snowman

Friendly
R
eal
O
rganized
S
now
T
all
Y
elled, "I'll be back again someday!"

T
alks
H
appy
E
xcited

S
illy
N
ose
O
range nose
W
inter
M
ade
A
ctive
N
ice

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Mrs. Lisa Harmon's Grades 1-3
Mineral King School
Visalia, California

 

Winter is when…

Snakes are sleeping under the snow,
A bird is making tracks in the snow,
Birds are eating from my bird feeder,
Birds are flying where the sun is,
Bears are looking for food in the warm cave,
Bats are hibernating in the cave
where the bear lives,
Birds are flying up in the sky,
Rats are eating in the snow,
And horses are sleeping in the barn.

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Mrs. Stephanie Wright's 1st Grade
Midland Academy
Midland, Georgia

Book: The Mitten by Jan Brett

We read many winter books and decided our favorite was The Mitten by Jan Brett. After discussing snow for several days we decided our poem should be about snow.

We do not get snow where we live very often. If we do get snow it melts before most are out of bed on a snow day. We began by webbing what we knew about snow. We used our web to write our class poem. Students were then able to create their own individual poems about snow. We had a lot of fun creating snowflakes to display our poems.

Snow

Snow Day!
No School!
Outside to play.
Wet, wild white stuff.

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Mrs. Stone's 1st Grade Reading Class
Mt. View Elementary School
Lacey, WA

Book: The Snowy Day by Ezra Jack Keats

January 2004: After having 3 extra days of vacation because of snow, we finally went back to school. Our morning had to deal with snow (since we still had a lot of it on the ground - something unusual for our area). We read The Snowy Day (Ezra Jack Keats) and then worked on individual acrostic poems using WINTER.

You can also check out our WINTER Poems page on our class website.  This poem was written by Sara:

Acrostic Poem

WINTER

Waterfalls are frozen solid
Ice cream is frozen
No School
Throwing snowballs at me
Ears are cold
Ready for Spring   


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Dolores Foltz' 1st Grade
Waterboro Elementary School
Waterboro, Maine
 

Books:  The Mitten by Jan Brett

We've been reading many winter books as we explore and experience this wonderful season. Some of our favorites are The Biggest Snowball Fight by Angela Medearis, Henry and Mudge and The Snowman Plan by Cynthia Rylant, and Snip, Snip, Snow! by Nancy Poydar.

As a written extension on the winter theme, we wrote 4 line poems. Here is one student's poem:


Black
Baitfish
Hanging from a string
Winter is super!

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After the children had the experience of writing their own 4 line poems, we wrote a class poem to complement The Mitten by Jan Brett. Here is our class poem:

White
Mitten
Stretching, getting bigger and bigger
The mitten became a home.

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Kathy Janzen's 2nd Grade
James Kennedy Elementary School
Langley, B.C., Canada

The students enjoyed reading many poems from past winter projects. Then we brainstormed fun things to do in winter and shared powerful describing words to make our poems interesting. Each student wrote their own poem and they turned out very well. We had just had a lot of snow so the students had lots of ideas to share. Each child contributed one line from their own poem to include in our class poem:

Winter is cool!

Building a snowman as big as my house

Snowboarding down the sparkling slope

Making snow angels in the beautiful snow

Tobogganing in the fluffy, white snow

Tasting a snowflake on my frozen tongue

Skating on the frozen pond

Riding down a hill in the sparkling snow

Tasting the white fluffy snow

Making a snow fort with my mom

Playing in the snow with my friends

Making soft snow angels

Sitting by the glowing fire

Tobogganing on the twirly hill

Snowboarding down a hill

Building a snow fort family

Making snow angels in the soft, white snow

Having a snowball fight in the front yard

The snow is coming

Drinking hot cocoa with creamy whip cream

Speeding down the hill in the glowing snow

Keeping warm by the cozy fire

Sliding on ice with bikes

Playing in the cold, chilly, nippy snow

Winter is cool!

 

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Mrs. Robertson's 1st Grade
Cardinal Elementary School
South Sioux City, NE

Book: The Biggest, Best Snowman by Margery Cuyler

Cinquain

The Biggest, Best Snowman

snowman
gigantic, humongous
rolling, packing, working
a tiny girl
creation


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Mr. Paul White's 1st Grade
Robert P.T. Coffin School
Brunswick, Maine

Book: Snow Day by Lynn Plourde

We read the story Snow Day by Lynn Plourde, a Maine children's author. We recreated the cover of her story into a bulletin board with models of us sledding on a snowy day.

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While reading this story we found out that Lynn has a special style of writing. She uses imagery, rhymes, sound words, and alliteration to create a mood or feeling. We used Lynn's writing style to create a class poem about sledding.

Free Verse Poem

Sledding Day

Grab our sliding sleds. Yeah!
We are going sledding today.
Run outside. Slam the door!
Walk up a snowy hill.
Crunch, crunch, crunch.
Sit down on the sled.
Push ourselves once and down we
go-o-o-o-o-o-o-o . . .
Kids are laughing. Hands in the air.
Whee! Yahoo! Yippee!

Plop! Glop! Bottom of the hill.
Can we do that again?
Sledding day, busy sledding day.



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