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cardinal icon.gif (1129 bytes) Read A Winter Book ...Write A Winter Poem
A Collaborative Literacy Project for Primary Students
Hosted by Marci McGowan  Winter 2003

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Brenda Smylie's 4, 5, 6 Graders
Mary Gardner School
Chateauguay, Quebec
Canada

Book: A Perfect Day For It  by Jan Fearnly

We read a number of winter books. The classes favourite was A Perfect Day For It.  We wrote cinquain poems.

 

Snow

White, icy

Melting, slippery, crunching

We all make snow angels

Snowflakes

 

 

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Martha Gross' First Grade
Bridger Elementary School
Portland, Oregon

Book: Thomas' Snowsuit by Robert Munch

Our school is located at the north end of the Willamette Valley in Oregon. Although we live but an hour’s drive from the majestic snow capped peak of Mt. Hood, we rarely get any snow here in Portland. In fact, this winter has been unseasonably mild and dry. Our usual form of precipitation is good old Oregon rain.

Many of the children in our classroom community are English Language Learners and have never experienced snow. They did not know how it looks, how it feels, how it sounds, not even what color it is.

 

In addition to this whole class poem we wrote and illustrated individual poems.  We based our winter poem on Thomas' Snowsuit.

 

 


SNOWSUIT

Snow falling fast- snowsuits needed
Nnnnno! Said naughty Thomas
Oh no Thomas, snow is falling
When it was time to go outside Thomas would not get his
            snowsuit on
Snowflakes falling fast
Underclothes are all that's left after an ENORMOUS
           fight

It's Thomas he won't put on his snowsuit
Thomas come out and play

 

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Mrs. Grauer and Mrs. Dover's First Grades
Bonnie Laur, Technology Coordinator
St. Michael School
Baltimore, Maryland

Book: The Snowy Day by Ezra Jack Keats

We look forward to reading all the poems that have been written by other students in the project.  We also will be emailing the website address to Kayla's dad who is stationed in Afganistan and has been coresponding to the children in her class so we
can share the project with him.

Winter

Winter is skiing
Winter is Christmas
Winter is igloos
Winter

by Kayla T.

 

Winter

Winter is beautiful
Winter is cold
Winter is Christmas
Winter is snow-covered trees
Winter is a season
Winter

by Kelly M.

 

Winter

Winter is cold
Winter is snowy
Winter is hot chocolate
Winter is sledding
Winter

by Emily D.

 

Winter

Winter is a snow covered tree
Winter is cold
Winter is snowfall
Winter

by Robert S.

 

 

 

 

Jennifer Gildea's First Grade
Van Cortlandtville Elementary School
Mohegan Lake, New York

Over the course of several weeks, we've read MANY, MANY winter books.   Some of our favorites were When Will It Snow? by Marty Crisp, The Wild Toboggan Ride by Suzan Reid & Eugenie Fernandes, and of course, Tacky the Penguin and Tacky the Emperor both by Helen Lester.

We had a blast and the fun continues. We wrote this poem through a shared writing about what winter means to us. In addition, we are writing our own acrostic winter poems in our writing center.

Winter is…

White snow,
Kids playing.
Cold Weather,
Families sleighing.

Drinking hot chocolate,
Making fires to keep warm.
Animals hibernating,
In the winter storm.

Shoveling snow off the driveway,
Pools and ponds are ice.
Snowflakes are falling,
Doesn't it look nice?

Dogs playing in the snow,
With my family I wish I could stay.
I have to go to school but,
Early dismissal, HOORAY!


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Jennifer Rambo's 3rd Grade
North Charleston Elementary School
North Charleston, South Carolina

Book:  Snowflake Bentley by Jacqueline Briggs Martin

Many of my students have never seen snow, except for a few flurries. In the deep South, 1/2 inch is considerered a blizzard. We read and discussed the book, Snowflake Bentley, focusing on the different types and shapes of snowflakes. We wrote individual and class poems to present in a readers theatre format.

 


There was a snowman
Who didn't want to melt.
His heart was heavy and sad
And misery is all he felt.

He called to the children
This is what he said,
"Please help me,
I'm losing my head".

The children replied,
"We'll put more snow on your head".
So they rolled a big snowball,
But dropped it instead.

"Oh my", said the snowman
"Now I have no head."
"Goodbye," said the children
There was no more to be said.


Ed. Note:  Click for information on Readers Theater.

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Barbara Holloway's First Grade
Caldwell County Primary
Princeton, Kentucky

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Book:  Manatee Winter by Kathleen Weidner Koehfeld

We are participating in a state mascot exchange and our visitor during this time was Maggie the manatee from Florida. We wrote an acrostic poem.

MANATEE WINTER

Manatees are mammals
A calf stays with its Mom
Nudging her baby to keep it safe
Awake in the morning
They go up for air
Eating seaweed
Exploring every corner of their winter home

Warmth and safety of the spring
In the Gulf-coast waters
Notices other calves have arrived
Thrashing their tails
Every few minutes they come up for air
Remaining near the warm spring

 

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Julie Filer's First Grade
Cathcart Elementary School
Snohomish, Washington

Book: Snow Riders by Constance W. McGeorge

After reading Snow Riders, we brainstormed lists of describing, naming, and actions words that helped us make images as we listened to the story. We used our word lists to help us create an acrostic poem. We then used Crayola Model Magic to make our own “snow creations.”

SNOW RIDERS

Sculpting snow horses on a cancelled school day,
Nighttime calls
Outside we go!
White, sparkling silent statues

Rumble and come alive . . . “Giddy up!”
Imaginary horses galloping and prancing
Down hills and over fences
Exciting adventure
Racing at midnight on our powerful creations
Slowing down, sliding off, and snuggling back into bed.

 

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Nancy Gallagher's First Grade
Mrs. Patricia Birch, Student Teacher
W.C. Bryant School
Cleveland, Ohio

Book: The Mitten and others by Jan Brett

We spent alot of time on Winter Themes. We did an author's study of Jan Brett.  Many of her books were read and discussed. The Mitten was the center of this study.  Many activities were done including a human retelling of this story.

Other books read were The Snowy Day by Ezra Jack Keats, The Snowman by Raymond Briggs, and The Jacket I Wear in the Snow by Shirley Neitzel.

The poems I selected are an acrostic and a patterned poem. The children wrote one of each and my student teacher made them into a power point presentation.  Many standards were covered and it showcased the children's speaking and listening skills as they presented this to an audience.  Here are two slide images:

Acrostic Poem

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Pattern Poem

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Sheri Betteridge
Early Literacy and Grade 1/2
Malden Public School
Amherstburg, Ontario
Canada

Book: Froggy Gets Dressed by Jonathan London

The grade 1/2 class read a wonderful and very funny story called Froggy Gets Dressed. This was our first attempt at poetry writing! We answered the 5 w's (who, what , where, when, why) and recorded them on chart paper. Then we cut them apart and rearranged them until we liked what we saw/heard. It turned out really well!

Froggy- A 5 W’s Poem

Froggy

He wants to leave his warm bed.

Froggy wants to have lots of fun outside.

Playing in the deep snow.

In the winter.

February 6, 2003

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Linda Johns' First Grade
Van Cortlandville Elementary School
Mohegan Lake, NY

We enjoyed reading the winter books and taking part in the project.

WHAT WINTER MEANS TO US

Christmas trees

Squirrels looking for food

Heavy boots to keep your feet warm

Ice skating at Bear Mountain

Having snowball fights with a friend

Hot chocolate when you come inside

Decorating the house

SNOW DAYS!!!

That's what winter means to us

 

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Celia Godsil's First Grade
Nielson School
Galesburg, Illinois
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Book: Stranger In the Woods
by Carl Sams II and Jean Stoick

We have talked quite a bit about poetry this week and we are well on our way to understanding and enjoying making poems. Today we looked at the poetry project web site and read many of the poems which are already posted. Afterwards, we listened to Stranger In the Woods.  We would like to share our poem with you now.

 

STRANGER

Who was in the woods?

What was it doing there?

When did it come?

Where did it come from?

Why was it in the woods?

Yummy food for the animals!

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Danielle Stewart's First Grade
Conn Elementary
Raleigh, North Carolina

Books: Flowers for the Snowman by Gerda Marie Scheidl

Acrostic Poem

WINTER

W hat am I going to do to get some flowers?
I f I go in the greenhouse I could find some flowers.
N ow I found them!
T his is getting too hot!
E verything is colorful.
R emember the flowers forever.

 

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Ms. Hefele's 2nd Grade
Thomas Jefferson Elementary School
Yorktown Heights, New York

Book:  The Snowman by Raymond Briggs

After looking at the story of The Snowman and watching the DVD, we made up a poem about the snowman. Since we were studying poetry, we tried using similes in our poem.

A Simile Poem

SNOWMAN

Snow as cold as a freezer.
Snow as white as the clouds.
Snow as hard as a rock.
Snow as round as a ball.

A nose as orange as the sun.
A hat as green as the grass.
Buttons like tiny, black ants.
A scarf as long as a lion's tail.

Coal eyes as black as a witch's hat.
A smile like a half moon.
A snowman as special as a person!


*Extra Activity
Since the book only has pictures and no one speaks in the DVD, we wrote the words to the story.

 

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Tara Visconti's First Grade
Van Cortlandtville Elementary
Mohegan Lake, New York
Our Extension Project

Books: The Mitten by Jan Brett,
A Little Bit of Winter by Paul Stewart,
It's Winter by Linda Glaser, and many others

During our study of Winter we wrote two list poems. We wrote a poem using our five senses; what we hear, see, smell, taste, and feel in the Winter. As a class we also wrote a poem listing what Winter is a time for. Our poems were inspiried by many of the books we read during shared reading and read alouds.

Five Senses Poem

Winter

I smell chicken soup cooking.
I see frozen lakes.
I taste hot chocolate and marshmallows.
I hear snow plows clearing the roads.
I feel snow falling on my face.

Free Verse Poem

Winter is a time for...
playing in the snow
snowball fights
lighting the fireplace
drinking hot chocolate
holidays
Christmas caroling
baking cookies


You can read all our individual poems too!
Our Extension Project

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Marti Plumtree's 2nd Grade
Lincoln Elementary School
La Crescenta, California

Book: A Little Bit of Winter by Paul Stewart

As part of our comprehension study, we have been reading and locating information in fiction and non-fiction pieces of work. At the same time we have been responding to text in many different ways.

Therefore we thought it would be fun to respond to the story A Little Bit of Winter using four different poem formats, and using the words and information from the story to enhance our understanding of winter. Here in Southern California some of us only get to visit the snow, we really don't know what it is like to live in the snow.

We chose to do a sensory poem, the 5 W's poem, a cinquain, and an acrostic poem. The children worked on one of the poem formats in groups of 4 and 5. Then we met as a class and edited all of the poems together.

Our Poems: A Little Bit of Winter

A Sensory Poem

A little bit of winter, what does it look like?
It looks white and brown, there's
no pink clover and no green grass.

A little bit of winter, what does it sound like?
It sounds like wind blowing.

A little bit of winter, what does it smell like?
It smells fresh and clean.

A little bit of winter, what does it feel like?
It tastes like a plain icy.

A little bit of winter, what does it feel like?
It feels like an ouch, it's hard, cold,
biting.

 

A 5 W Poem

Hedgehog and Rabbit
Hedgehog wants to know what winter feels like
In the winter
Outside in a field
Because Hedgehog hibernates.

 

A Cinquain

Winter
Cold, white
Snowing, playing, melting
Some animals are hibernating
Snow


An Acrostic Poem

L leaves turn brown
I it turned into a small snowball
T the wind blew icy cold
T the snow melted
L letter that Hedgehog wrote to rabbit
E eating brown leaves and bark

B bit of winter
I it was time to find somewhere warm
T the lake turned to ice

O "Ouch," Hedgehog cried, " it bit me."
F forgetful rabbit

W wrapped the snowball in leaves
I It grew bigger and bigger
N No, I won't miss you
T There was no pink clover
E enormous snowball
R Rabbit saved a little bit of winter for Hedgehog

 

 

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Martha Kubik's Enrichment Students
West Amwell Elementary Echool
Hunterdon County, New Jersey

Book:  Owl Moon by Jane Yolen

We chose Owl Moon as the inspiration for our winter poems because the illustrator, John Schoenherr, is a local man. He lives only four miles from our school. His farm, the basis for the book’s illustrations, is like many of the farms that surround our school. The farms, and the surrounding forests and the creatures that inhabit them, are a part of our students’ lives. Both our third classes participated, and both poems are included.

Free Verse Poem

I am excited yet scared and cold.
I am quiet and amazed.
I am happy yet sad
Waiting for the owl to soar gracefully overhead.

I am the owl
Confident and proud.
I am hunting for a meal.
I am brave.
I am alone and quiet.
I am happy and free.
I see a figure as I soar gracefully overhead.

~ Class Poem by 3Keefe

 

The trees are bare
Their branches look like dead hands.
Snow blankets cover the ground.
Animals rest gently under the snow.
An owl waits proudly, perching silently.
There is a movement below
The owl glides down, deadly.

~ Class Poem by 3Holohan

 

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Mrs. Corey's 2nd Grade
Coleman School
Glen Rock, New Jersey

Book: WINTER, An Alphabet Acrostic by Steven Schnur

After reading the book, the students wrote their own acrostic poems using the winter theme. As a culminating activity, all the students contributed to creating Winter, their class acrostic poem.

Acrostic Poem

WINTER

Whistling winds swirl the snowflakes
In the stillness of the night until
Nothing is on the ground but a white blanket as we
Try to patiently wait for
Early morning to
Race to the waiting wonderland.

Extension: Steven Schnur has written acrostic poem books for the other seasons as well.

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Ms. Rice's First Grade
Lincoln-Titus Elementary School
Crompond, New York

Book:  Snowmen at Night by Caralyn Buehner

Snowmen at Night by Caralyn Buehner made us laugh. The rhyming story told us about the fun things that snowmen do at night when we are asleep. Dancing in a conga line is one of the funniest things the snowmen do!

We have been learning about verbs, nouns, and adjectives so we wrote a free verse poem about Snowmen at Night using those kinds of words.

Free Verse Poem

SNOWMEN AT NIGHT

Slipping, sledding, sipping

Pond, hill, cocoa

Frozen, steep, icy

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Katie Collins' 2nd Grade
Coleman School
Glen Rock, NJ

Book: Owl Moon by Jane Yolen

For this special project, we enjoyed the beautiful illustrations and the descriptive words in Owl Moon.

We wrote a class poem about the story. Our 5Ws poem tells: who the story is about, what it is about, when it takes place, where it takes place, and why it takes place.

Owl Moon

A little boy and his grandpa
quietly owling together
on a freezing, cold night in snowy winter
deep in the pitch black forest
hoping to see a Great Horned Owl.

As an extension activity, the students will write 5Ws poems about other stories.

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Norma Goddard's 2nd Grade
Lincoln Elementary School
La Crescenta, CA

Book:  Geraldine's Big Snow by Holly Keller

We wrote a Character Poem about Geraldine.

GERALDINE

Geraldine
Is a nice, curious and friendly pig
Who loves snow
Who can't wait to go sledding
But is very impatient
Who is afraid the snow won't come
Who would like to see a foot of new snow
And ends up sledding down the highest hill in town.

 

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  Mrs. Spann's First Grade
West Elementary School
Daingerfield, Texas
Website

Book: Dear Rebecca, Winter Is Here
by Jean Craighead George

We read Dear Rebecca, Winter Is Here after brainstorming what we already knew about winter. We wanted to find out more about how animals stay warm in the winter. It was interesting to find out squirrels line their homes with leaves to stay warm.

Here is our class acrostic poem.The students also wrote individual poems and decorated them to hang in the hall for all to enjoy.

 

WINTER

Winter is here!
I am cold
Need warm clothes
Time to go inside
Eat soup
Read a winter book

 

 


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Cathy Dugger's First Grade
Douglas Primary School
Douglas, Wyoming

Book:  The Wild Toboggan Ride by Suzan Reid

Our class read the book, The Wild Toboggan Ride. The students loved listening to this story again and again. After we read the book several times, the students made text-to-self connections as they shared their many experiences with sledding. The students completed the activity by illustrating a picture that went along with the poem. It was fun to write this acrostic poem!

SLEDDING

Sledding is fun!
Laughing all the way down the hill.
Everyone wants to go again.
Dashing through the snow,
Dancing snowflakes all around.
I love sledding!
Now let's do it again!
Good-bye! We're going home to have some hot cocoa.

 

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Susan Beaudet's 2nd Grade
John F. Horgan School
West Warwick, RI

Website

Book: Snowflake Bentley by Jacqueline Briggs Martin

Cinquain Poem

Snowflakes
All different
Floating, drifting, dancing
Tiny jewels of lace
Crystals

 

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Miss Catherine Inzer's Multiage 1-2 Class
Captain Isaac Paine Elementary School
Foster, Rhode Island

Book:  Snowflake Bentley by Jacqueline Briggs Martin

We had a great time learning about the man who devoted his entire life to learning about snowflakes. Our class discussed the courage and strength Snowflake Bentley must have had to keep on pursuing his dream, even though people thought he was foolish. We decided to write an acrostic poem about Snowflake Bentley to describe how we feel about him.

Acrostic Poem

SNOWFLAKE BENTLEY

S now crystals
N ever gave up
O utstanding effort
W orked hard
F reezing cold outside
L oving blizzards
A nxious for a camera
K ind to nature
E njoyed catching snowflakes

B
rought snowflakes to his microscope-camera
E xtra hours of work
N ever stopped working with snow
T ried his best
L oving person to all
E xpected all snowflakes to be the same, but they
   weren't...
Y ou'll love his book!

The End

 

 

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Karen Morse's 2nd Grade
Ann Dea, Media Specialist
Walnut Grove Elementary School
Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Book: The Snow Lambs by Debi Gliori

Our teacher read to us the book . We noticed that it was like two stories in one.   It was written from Sam's point of view as he worried about the whereabouts of his dog, Bess, who wandered off following a sheep breaking away from the herd. At the same time the author, who also illustrated the book, used a split-page technique showing Bess's adventures on one side of the double-page spread, while Sam's nightly routine was shown on the other side.

We wrote acrostic poems and also wrote the story from Bess's point of view, describing what she might be thinking. When we finished we drew winter pictures of Bess's adventure, painted a wash over them and glued cotton over the sheep. 
You may see all our work here ... and enjoy this class acrostic poem:

SNOW LAMBS

S now started falling and a storm's blowing in.
N eed to get the sheep safely in the barn.
O nly two problems - Where's Bess, Sam's sheepdog, and.......
W ill the strong winds blow down the old elm tree on the
power lines?

L ights go out suddenly after a loud CRACK.
A fter Sam's bath, he's too worried to go to sleep.
M aybe Bess is out there cold, tired, or lost
B rave Bess shows up at the door that night with their best
ewe who's ready to lamb.
S now lamb babies were born the next morning thanks to
Bess, the best shepherd of all!

 

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Mrs. St. Clair's Super Second Grade
Butler Elementary
Santa Rosa Beach, Florida

Book: Snowflake Bentley by Jacqueline Briggs Martin

  We've been busy reading and writing! We read many winter books including Snowballs, The Biggest Snowball Ever!, The Snowchild, and The Biggest, Best Snowman and each of us wrote a Haiku which we assembled into a Cozy Winter Paper Quilt. We also read Snowflake Bentley. Today we revisited Snowflake Bentley and learned how to write a cinquain. We made a Venn Diagram comparing the two types of poems (Haiku and Cinquain).

Our Cinquains

Water
Icy crystal
Falling down from the sky
Wonderously amazing change
Snowflake

 

Bentley
Expert on snow
Studied ice crystals
As beautiful as butterflies
World gift

 

 

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Joanne Shepard's 2nd Grade
Ann Dea, Media Specialist
Walnut Grove Elementary School
Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Book:  Happy Winter by Karen Gundersheimer    

After a rather warm December, we finally got snow and cold along with a "no school snow day" in January. We found the book Happy Winter by Karen Gundersheimer and read about the many fun things children can do from morning to night, indoors and outdoors, on a happy winter day.  Our class poems were written after listening to this book.

5 W's Poem

Little kids
Playing happily
In the morning sun
Outside in the soft snow
Lots of winter fun

4-line Poem

SNOW

White
Flakes
Floating
Snow is wonderful winter water.

 

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Amy Rallis' 2nd Grade
Ann Dea, Media Specialist
Walnut Grove Elementary School
Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Books we read: Froggy Gets Dressed by Jonathan London
Snowflake Bentley by Jacqueline Briggs Martin
The Snowy Day by Ezra Jack Keats

Greetings from Council Bluffs, Iowa. We have been experiencing a cold spell complete with a few inches of snow which really set the stage for this project. We enjoyed reading our stories and writing our poetry. It was fun reading poetry written by students from all over the world.

wpe4B5.jpg (6713 bytes) Our teacher read to us the book Froggy Gets Dressed..  She then modeled how to write a "character poem". We wrote our own poems and this is our class character poem:

Froggy
Froggy is forgetful.
Who loves to play outside
Who feels good about winter
Who needs to be reminded by his mother about his clothes
Who'd like to see himself all dressed up
Who ends up not going outside to play  

 

wpe4B3.jpg (5849 bytes) Our teacher also read to us the book Snowflake Bentley.  She modeled how to write an acrostic poem.

We wrote our own poems. This is our class acrostic poem.

SNOWFLAKE

Snow, snow, snow
New and
Old
Where does it
Fall? I
Love
All
Kinds
Excellent!!!!! 

 

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He saw snow, snowballs and kids.
He
touched the snow and a stick.
He
heard the crunching of snow beneath his feet.
He
smelled breakfast cooking.
He
tasted the snow and breakfast.   

 

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Mrs. Terry Stoufer's 3rd Grade
Lecanto Primary School
Lecanto, Florida

Book:  Snowflake Bentley by Jacqueline Briggs Martin

Our class read Snowflake Bentley during our career week. We talked about how different his job was, and how interesting a character he was. We enjoyed reading the facts about him and we are going to try and locate the book he published. Our poem is an acrostic poem about Snowflake Bentley.

Acrostic Poem

SNOWFLAKE BENTLEY

S cientific farmer was he,
N ot your usual farmer.
O ver the hills he carried his camera
W alks through blizzards,
F inding special treasures.
L over of graceful snowflakes.
A ppreciator of nature.
K ept him intrigued.
E arly rising to catch the dew on the webs!

B lizzards were his thing,
E xamines nature with care.
N ever stopped trying, never quit.
T akes crystal pictures.
L eft behind a book of photography,
E ager to share the treasures with us.
Y ou’ll never be forgotten!

 

 

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