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cardinal icon.gif (1129 bytes) Read A Winter Book ...Write A Winter Poem
A Collaborative Literacy Project for Primary Students
Hosted by Marci McGowan  Winter 2003

~ Student Poems Page 2 ~



Virginia F. Giacobone's First Grade
Captain Isaac Paine Elementary School
Foster, Rhode Island

Book:  The Mitten Tree by Candace Christiansen

We followed the format of The Important Book by Margaret Wise Brown.

An Important Poem

Sarah

The important thing about Sarah is she knitted mittens for the children.

She saw the boy with no mittens.

Sara
h knitted mittens for the little boy.

Sarah hung the mittens on the tree.

The tree has mittens.

Children came to take mittens.

Someone left a basket of yarn so Sarah could knit more mittens.

But, the important thing about Sarah is she knitted mittens for the children.

 

 

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Brenda Asher's First Grade
Edgemere Elementary School
Oklahoma City, OK

Books: Geraldine's Big Snow by Holly Keller

Diamante Poem

Geraldine's Big Snow

Geraldine
pink little
walking anticipating playing
Geraldine went walking and looked at the sky.
outside

 

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Patti Warren's First Grade
Saline High School
Saline, LA

Acrostic Poem

WINTER RABBIT

Water frozen
Icicles
Now it's snowing
Time to build a friend
Everyone helps
Rabbit will be our friend

Rabbit is made of snow
Ate a snow carrot
Best skater ever
Balls thrown made of snow
It was a fabulous day
Temperature rises, Goodbye Rabbit till next year


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Ada Swanson's Room 3 First Grade
Smith Road Elementary
North Syracuse, New York

Book: White Snow, Bright Snow by Alvin Tresselt

We brainstormed some verbs and adverbs to describe snowflakes coming down:

Snowflakes
drifting
sifting
scurrying
whispering
dancing
tumbling
floating
roaring
sprinkling
fluttering
whooshing
rushing
Snowflakes
You fill our world with wonder.

We brainstormed some adjectives to describe how snowflakes look:

White Snow, Bright Snow Made of Snowflakes

powdery snowflakes
lacy snowflakes
icy, cold snowflakes
fluffy snowflakes
glittery snowflakes
shiny snowflakes
glistening snowflakes
sparkling snowflakes
tiny snowflakes
flustery snowflakes
blustery snowflakes
We love you, snowflakes.


Also, we collected ideas from the book about what the snow does, and then we brainstormed more ideas.

White Snow, Bright Snow Look What You've Done

covered the roofs
filled branches with great white blossoms
buried the fields and stone walls
made pictues of ice ferns on window panes
gave windows great white eyebrows
put pointed caps on the church steeples
made cars into big fat snowdrift raisins
dripped into long shiny icicles
put dunce caps on fenceposts

White Snow Bright Snow
You've dressed the world in a beautiful white gown.

 

 

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Jacqueline Ross' First Grade
Snoqualmie Elementary School
Snoqualmie, Washington

Books: Dear Rebecca Winter Is Here by Jean Craighead George and Missing Mitten Mystery by Steven Kellogg

This has been really hard because winter
never arrived in the Northwest! 

Sensory Poems

Winter
By Kylie

In winter I
see Christmas trees.
In winter I
hear bells ring.
In winter I
feel sticky.
In winter I
taste sugar.
In winter I
smell my tree.


Winter Today
By Kendal

In winter I
see snow
In winter I
hear money drop in cans
In winter I
feel warm and cuddly inside
In winter I
taste good food
In winter I
smell fires burning

 


Winter
By Alanna

In winter I am supposed to
see snow
In winter I
hear birds that were supposed to fly away
In winter I should
feel cold
In winter I
taste mints
In winter I
smell pine


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Nancy Golubic's First Grade
Market Street School
Boardman, Ohio
Website Home       Winter Page

Books: The Mitten by Jan Brett and
Snowflake Bentley by Mary Azarian

We read many winter books and poems in our first grade class in Boardman, Ohio. It's been quite a winter! We've already had 3 snow days!  We wrote a 5Ws poem about The Mitten and Snowflake Bentley and then wrote 5Ws poems about ourselves!


5Ws Poems

Niki

Niki
lost his mitten
after Baba knitted it
in the forest.
It fell in the snow!

 

Snowflake Bentley

Snowflake Bentley
took pictures of snowflakes
all through his life
in Vermont.
Snowflake Bentley loved snow!


We're working on illustrations for both of these poems. We're doing them in the style of Susan Jeffers, who illustrated a book of the poem Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening by Robert Frost. She did beautiful, detailed pencil drawings with just accents of color. You will be able to see our all our poems and illustrations on the winter page of our classroom website.

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Carole Underwood's 3rd Grade
St. Thomas More School
Baton Rouge, Louisiana

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Book: We read several Jan Brett books
and Snowflake Bentley by Jacqueline Briggs Martin

In addition to this class poem, we wrote winter cinquain and acrostic poems which you can see on our webpage:
Selected Individual Winter Poems

Acrostic Poem

SNOWFLAKE

Snowfall this morning
Neat and pretty
Old and young out playing
Winter beauty
Forget about school
Lacy little flakes
A lot of hot chocolate
Kids having fun
Exciting day!

 

 

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Mrs. Brown's K /1 class
Crest School
El Cajon, California

Books: The Hat and The Mitten by Jan Brett

We read a different winter book every day for the month of January.   These were two of our favorites.

5 Senses Poem

We love winter!

Winter
feels like a refrigerator.

Winter
smells like hot cocoa.

Winter
tastes like an Icee.

Winter
sounds like quiet snow.

Winter
looks like an igloo.

We love winter!

 

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Carolyn Williams' 2nd Grade
North Augusta Elementary School
North Augusta, South Carolina

Book: Thomas' Snowsuit by Robert Munsch

After reading this book, we decided to read as many Robert Munsch books as we could and we wrote this poem:

5 W Poem

Thomas' Snowsuit

(Who) Thomas
(What) He won't put on his snowsuit
(When) When they go outside for recess
(Where) At school
(Why) Thomas thought the snowsuit was ugly

 

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Beth Brandes' First Grade
Benjamin Franklin Elementary School
Shrub Oak, NY

Book: The Snowchild by Debi Gliori
and The Winter Eyes by Douglas Florian

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Free Verse Poem

Winter is Fun

Snowy
Cold
Snowflakes
Icicles
Warm Clothes
Making a Snowman
Snow Angels
Igloos
Ice Fishing
Ice Sculptures
Ice Skating
Skiing
Snow Boarding
Snow Hiking
Hot Chocolate
Winter is fun



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Mrs. Ertel's 2nd Grade
Oakleigh Elementary
Baltimore, Maryland

Book: The Big Snow by Berta and Elmer Hader

We read the book and wrote this ABC poem. Now the students are working on poems of their own.

ABC Poem

THE BIG SNOW

Food is under the snow.
Groundhogs hibernate peacefully.
Hunting for food.
Ice and snow everywhere.
Jays shake their feathers.
Kind people help the animals.
Little birds fly to eat seeds.
Many animals throng together.
And that was the end of the Big Snow.

 

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Patti Beaudry Grade 1B
Cadotte Lake School
Cadotte Lake, Alberta, Canada

Book: North Country Night by Daniel San Souci

Rhyming Poem

NORTH COUNTRY NIGHT

On a cold winter's night
The hunter was in bed,
But, not the animals
They were busy instead.
The great horned owl was flying,
The raccoon started to dig,
The deer was having a drink,
While the rabbit chewed on twigs.
But the night was soon over,
Now it was almost day.
The hunter would be up,
The animals went away.

The poem was a good introduction for rhyme and counting syllables.  The class has browsed the project website and enjoyed all the poems.  They liked "The Black Snowman" from Newark, NJ.

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Mrs. Rowland's First Graders
Pearson Elementary
Poulsbo, Washington

Website

Books: Grandmother Winter by Phyllis Root
& Snow Ponies by Cynthia Cotten

      First, we read a fun winter book called Grandmother Winter by Phyllis Root. This book explains that snow comes from Grandmother Winter's quilt made of goose feathers which she shakes over everything and everyone.

     The next book we read was called Snow Ponies by Cynthia Cotten. This is a lovely book that portrays a loving Old Man Winter who sets his "snow ponies" free to frolic through the countryside spreading a white blanket of snow where ever they run.

     After reading both, of course, we were excited to connect and compare the different explanations of winter and snow. We decided though that Snow Ponies would be the best to use for our winter poem. We loved the word choice and thought some of the phrases would be wonderful in our free verse poem.  We had been working through Regie Routman's lessons on poetry from her book Kids' Poems and had been writing some poetry on our own. This was a terrific opportunity for us to write a class poem in the free verse style.

     Later, we painted snow ponies doing what we could see them doing in our imaginations. Please enjoy our poem and our paintings. They are currently displayed in the hall outside our door and we have been getting many compliments on our work.

Free Verse Poem

SNOW PONIES

Pretty snow ponies,
Whipping tails,
Flying manes,
Prancing and playing,
Whistling and whinnying.
Magical feet touch the ground
Turning everything white.


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Coming Soon!  Mrs. Rowland will be posting all
of her students' illustrations on their website.

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Dina Peters' First Grade
Van Cortlandtville Elementary
Mohegan Lake, New York

Book: Winter by Pauline Cartwright    

      During our shared reading experience with this book, we learned how to use a K-W-L chart to help us learn about winter.  We also discussed the five senses and what we see, hear, taste, smell, and feel in winter. To wrap up our unit, we composed a shared writing piece. This was our first experience with writing an acrostic poem, and boy did we have fun! Enjoy!

Acrostic Poem

Winter

Winter is cold.
Ice is slippery.
No more hot days in winter.
The snow falls from the sky.
Everything is icy.
Rivers are frozen.


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Mrs. McClanaghan's First Grade
Trombly Elementary, Grosse Pointe Schools
Grosse Pointe, MI

Book: White Snow, Bright Snow by Alvin Tresselt

Acrostic Poem

WHITE SNOW

Winter is here.
Houses are covered in snow.
Ice is on the ground.
The snow is cold.
Every day it is freezing.



Snow is falling from the sky.
Now winter is here.
Oh, I want to have a snowball fight!
Winter will come again.

 

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Gayle Hamilton's First Grade
Thomas Jefferson Elementary School
Yorktown Heights, New York

Book: The Snow Kept on Falling by Kathie Mc Queary

This is the story of a snowstorm that lasted an entire day. A repeating pattern in the book was "The snow kept on falling." The children connected the book with Christmas Day 2002 when a major snowstorm hit our area and left us with over a foot of snow! We decide to write our poem using the same pattern and using the entire day as the author did.

Pattern Poem


The Snow Kept on Falling

The snow started to fall.
It was Christmas morning.
Children started to wake up.
We wanted to go visit Grandma,
But the snow kept on falling!

Icicles on the house
Clouds filled the air
Frost on cars and windows
Everything is white
And the snow kept on falling!

Drinking hot chocolate
Cozy near the fire
Watch movies, have popcorn
Play games, curl up on the couch
And the snow kept on falling!

Have a snowball fight
Make a snowman
Go sledding, make snow angels
Build an igloo
And the snow kept on falling!

Nighttime comes
We got our pajamas on.
Look out the window.
Mom says it will stop.
BUT THE SNOW KEPT ON FALLING!


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Michele Nash's 2nd Grade
Cumberland Elementary
Whitefish Bay, WI

Book: Snowflake Bentley by Jacqueline Briggs Martin

We read this 1999 Caldecott Award winning book . We learned that Wilson Bentley was an amazing man full of patience and questions.

After we read the book, we wrote a class poem about him. Our poem followed the pattern used in a book by Margaret Wise Brown titled The Important Book.

Pattern Poem

The important thing about Snowflake Bentley is that he was a very patient man.
He was born on February 9, 1865 in Jericho, Vermont.
He loved snowflakes more than anything else.
Snowflake Bentley discovered that no two
snowflakes are the same.
He had a camera that had a special microscope on it.
He was the first person to take pictures of snowflakes.
Bentley studied and photographed snowflakes every winter.
He never quit when his experiments didn't work.
He was a Scientist of snow.
He also loved playing the piano and singing songs.
He published a book with pictures of snowflakes.
But the important thing about Snowflake Bentley
is that he was a very patient man.

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Mrs. Eileen Lynch's Third grade
Lincoln Titus Elementary
Crompond, NY

Book: When It Starts to Snow
by Phillis Gershator

Our class read this book and wrote a poem together.

Free Verse Poem

WHEN IT STARTS TO SNOW

What if it starts to snow?
What do you do?
Where do you go?

We go outside
and sleigh ride.
Often we have a snowball fight,
to our delight.

We love to ski
and look at all the beautiful scenery.
When we ice skate
we feel like we are floating like a snowflake.

There are times when we just stay inside
and stay under the covers and hide.
Then, we make hot cocoa
and look out our window.

What do you do when it starts to snow?
Shovel?
Oh-no?


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Mary Sheridan's 1st Grade Language Lab
St. Joan of Arc School
Evanston, Illinois

Book: Stranger in the Woods
by Carl R. Sams and Jean Stoick

This is a beautiful book which captures the innocence of youth
and the beauty of nature with a stunning photographic essay.
We read the book and marveled at the pictures. Acrostic poems were then written using the word SNOWMAN. We shared our poems at a K-4 Poetry recital with a pretend fire and real hot chocolate!!
 

Acrostic Poem

SNOWMAN

S is for Stranger
N is for Nest
O is for Old Owl
W is for Winter fun
M is for Munching Muskrat
A is for Animals
N is for Nice Story!

We also had fun with four line Winter poems. Some examples:

BLUE
LIPS
CHATTERING
WINTER IS COLD!!
by Corey

BROWN
MOUSE
SCURRIES
WINTER IS COOL!
by Jimmy

WHITE
SKATES
GLIDING
WINTER IS FUN!
by Margot

FAST
BUCK
RUNS AWAY
AFRAID OF STRANGERS!
by Brian

 

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Debbie Rastin's Grade One
Trafalgar PS
London, ON
Canada
Email

Book: How Cold Was It? by Jane Barclay


It is a WONDERFUL book for descriptive words. With the cold arctic weather that we've had the past week, it fit in just right. The children wrote and illustrated a cinquain poem.

Cinquain Poem


Cold
shivery, icy
freezing, stinging, crunching
The snowdrifts piled high.
Winter



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Mrs. McGowan's First Grade
H. W. Mountz School
Spring Lake, NJ
Email     Website

Book: Flowers For The Snowman by Gerda Marie Scheidl

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A very unhappy snowman searches for the rainbow-colored flowers he has heard about.  Although some animals try to discourage him, the snowman continues his search.  Exhausted, he leans on a door and falls into a greenhouse of beautiful flowers.   In the morning the gardener shovels the melting snow into the yard where some  children remake the snowman. Now he's a happy snowman who remembers seeing flowers in every color of the rainbow.

We really enjoyed this lovely book and used a poem to retell the story after the second reading.  The diamante format is challenging for first graders but can be accomplished successfully when written with the whole class.  We chose a 4-line poem format for our individual poems about winter.  We hope you will enjoy all of them!

Diamante Poem

Flowers For The Snowman

Snowman

Sad, miserable

Looking, asking, walking

He was happy when he found them.

Flowers!

Diamante (Diamond) Poem Format:

Title

one noun
two adjectives describing the noun
three action words ending in ing that explain your noun
a complete sentence about the noun
another noun about 1st noun


We also wrote 4-line poems about winter.  You can read them and see our illustrations on this website:

Our Winter Poems

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Laura Brantley's 2nd Grade
Caldwell County Primary
Princeton, KY

Book: The Mitten by Jan Brett

We chose to write a four line poem because it was a great way to review nouns, verbs, and adjectives. The students loved the story. After making our class poem I had the students work with a partner to complete an acrostic poem about The Mitten. The students are all very excited to see their poem on the web.

4-Line Poem


THE MITTEN

Comfortable
mitten
pulled and stretched.
The mitten is a warm home for the animals.

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Barbara Centofanti's First Grade
Benjamin Franklin Elementary School
Shrub Oak, NY

 

Free Verse Poem

 

Winter is Here

Hooray, Hooray, Hooray!
Winter is finally here!
Winter brings us laughter
And lots of joy and happy times.
There are so many things to do
Sleigh riding,
Ice skating,
Snow boarding,
And don't forget to build lots of jolly snowmen!
Drinking hot chocolate is a tasty treat to have
Yum, Yum, Yum!
Especially when you feel like an icicle in the cold winter weather!
We love winter!
Winter is a blast!

 

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   Logan's snowman says, "It's Winter!"'s

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Georgia Cloer's First Grade
Mitchell Road School
Greenville, SC
Mrs. Cloer's Classy Clowns and Classy Clowns School Website

Book: The Mitten by Jan Brett

We have been reading all of Jan Brett books during January
and wrote an acrostic poem for this project:


THE MITTEN

T is for thick yarn.
H is for hedgehogs prickles.
E is for every animal entering.

M is for moving mitten.
I is for interesting animals.
T is for tight fit.
T is for together at last.
E is for exciting sneeze.
N is for Nikki's mitten white as snow!


by Cloer's Classy Clowns
January 22, 2003

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Kirsten Davis' 2nd Grade
McKee Elementary School
West Allegheny School District
Pittsburgh, PA

Book:  Sadie and the Snowman by Allen Morgan

This book fit nicely with our current science unit, Changes.
Changes deals with states of matter which is a perfect unit to be studying at this time of year in western Pennsylvania. We were able to discuss the different states of matter which occur in the book and extend our study by creating a winter poem! After we wrote this sensory class poem, the students got the chance to write their own. What a wonderful integrated extension to our unit! Here is the poem that we created as a class:

 

Our Winter Snow Poem

Winter, winter, what does it look like?
Winter looks like fluffy white pillows.

Winter, winter, what does it sound like?
Winter sounds like, "Watch out for that snowball!"

Winter, winter, what does it smell like?
Winter smells like logs burning.

Winter, winter, what does it feel like?
Winter feels like big marshmallows.

 

We had fun being a part of this poetry project.  We enjoyed the poems which have been posted thus far and look forward to reading more!


Roberta Gray's 2nd Grade
Austinburg Elementary
Austinburg, Ohio
Our Winter Poetry Website

Our Winter Book List
Here's an annotated list of wonderful winter books!

gray.jpg (30029 bytes)After reading several fiction, non-fiction, and poetry books about winter, we decided to write a shape poem for our class poem. We discussed many ideas and decided to write about snowflakes.

Please visit our class website to read how we made this shape poem and our individual student poems.

Mrs. Gray's Class:  Winter Poetry

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Mrs. Hehner's 3rd Grade
Queen of All Saints School
St. Louis, Missouri

Book: Ralph's Frozen Tale by Elise Primavera

Our class was so lucky! A former student in our grade school, Tyler, was off of high school for the day. He volunteered to come and spend the day with our class! Tyler planned lots of fun activities. He read us this winter book. It is a great story! After listening to the story our class wrote this poem together.


Character Poem

RALPH'S RADICAL NORTH POLE ADVENTURE

Ralph is very brave because he battles snakes.
He wants to go to the North Pole.
After getting huskies, he meets a friendly polar bear.

Ralph laughs at everything because he thinks he is the bravest.
Ralph laughs at danger even though things are getting harder.
Then he flies into a "snow pile."
The snow pile was the bear and they both still live at the North Pole.

After our class created the poem together, we each copied the poem and drew a picture of Radical Ralph. We have our classroom decorated with lots and lots of snowflakes!

Our teacher says: Children are like snowflakes. No two are alike.  Have a great winter!!!!!!

 

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Sally Balm's 2nd grade
John Campbell Elementary
Selah, WA

Book:  Scooby Doo! and Santa's Bake Shop
by Jesse Leon McCann


Santa Got Stuck

Santa Clause got stuck
in the chimney
on Christmas Eve
at my house.

He fell off his sleigh
and landed on the rooftop.
Santa yelled, "Help!"
Scooby Doo went in the door and saved Santa!

Scooby and Santa ate some cookies
and delivered presents to the boys and girls.
Santa thanked Scooby Doo
And gave him some doggy treats!

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Malinda Ponton's First Grade
Riverdale Elementary
Orlando, Florida

Book: Grandmother Winter by Phyllis Root

After reading the book we discussed who Grandmother Winter really was and whether she was a real person.  We discovered the word metaphor and decided that Grandmother Winter was a metaphor for the season winter.

The following is the class "5 W’s Poem" we wrote together. It tells who, does what, when, where & why.


5 W’s Poem

Grandmother Winter
shakes her white quilt of snow
in the winter
on the Earth
to cover it for a winters nap.


We also investigated the many animals found in the beautiful illustrations and made a chart showing animals that "sleep in the winter," "don’t sleep through the winter," and "go south for the winter."   As a homework connection, we each wrote a winter poem using a poetic form of our choice. 

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Laura Trapp's First Grade
Four Georgians Elementary
Helena, Montana

Book:  Mrs. Toggle's Zipper by Robin Pulver

We laughed and laughed as we read about the teacher who couldn't get her coat off!  Her zipper was stuck and the thingamajig that pulls the zipper was missing!  We wrote this acrostic poem together.

ZIPPER

Zipper was stuck
It was hot inside
Pulled on her coat
Pull harder!
Everybody fell on the floor
Remember to look up thingamajig!

We have been enjoying reading the poems from other classes.

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Judi Robertson's First Grade
Cardinal Elementary
South Sioux City, Nebraska

Book:  Snow is Falling by Franklyn Mansfield Branley

This is a "Let's Read and Find Out" book about snow. We used a "patterned poem" as our framework. The children brainstormed a list of descriptive words about snow, many of which came from the book. We put them on index cards and arranged and re-arranged and re-arranged again until we got the final results!

Snow, Snow, Snow
by Mrs. Robertson's First Grade 2003

Snow, snow, snow
White snow,
Cold snow,
Sparkling, quiet, falling snow.
Wet, icky, sticky snow.
That's just a start you know!

Snowman snow,
Snowball snow,
Pretty, fluffy, fun snow.
Dry, deep, cool snow.
Slippery snow, too!

Icy snow,
Blizzard snow,
Don't forget melting snow!
Last of all, best of all,
We like all snow!

 

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