Read A Winter Book ... Write A Winter Poem
A Collaborative Literacy Project for Primary Students

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PARTICIPANT COMMENTS


VISITOR COMMENTS


To post a comment about the project or a class poem, send email to Marci. Thanks!

Project Home     Participating Classes

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I'm happy to share this news with all participating
teachers and students: 

3/11/03
Hello Marci, 
     I am writing to let you know that the members of the RTEACHER listserv have awarded you "The Miss Rumphius Award."  RTEACHER is a discussion group for literacy and technology (http://www.reading.org/publications/rt/rt_listserv.html) run in conjunction with The Reading Teacher, a journal of the International Reading Association.  We present this award for your wonderful example of a classroom home page located at: http://www.mrsmcgowan.com/winter2003/index.html
     Members of the RTEACHER mailing list (listserv) present the MISS RUMPHIUS AWARD to educators who develop and share exceptional Internet resources for literacy and learning.  It honors teachers who make our world a more beautiful place, like the title character in the book Miss Rumphius by Barbara Cooney. Because Miss Rumphius scattered lupine seeds wherever she went, we use this flower as the symbol for our award.
     If you wish to learn more about this award, the web page is located at: http://www.reading.org/awards/rumphius.html
Best wishes for continued success in the important work you contribute to our instructional worlds!


Cindy Held
Manager of the RTEACHER listserv

VISITOR COMMENTS

2/19/03  Dear Marci,  I think you made some kind of collaborative Internet project history with 92 participants!  After seeing your wonderful project I can understand how you were able to draw such a crowd!   Congratulations on an exemplary project!  
Susan Silverman  

Susan's Webfolio
http://kids-learn.org
Board Member-Iste-Sig for Telelearning
http://www.iste.org/sigtel/officers.html
2/12/03
I have just visited your "Read A Winter Book...Write A Winter Poem" project. It's outstanding .... really a wonderful piece of work.


Patti Knox - Technology Support Specialist, North Canton,Ohio
http://www.northcanton.sparcc.org/~ptk1nc/index.html

PARTICIPANT COMMENTS


2/24
We enjoyed doing the project and seeing the many different types of poetry used by different classes. Our first grade worked together creating a winter unit using several different big books. Even in our own school you can see the growth because some classes actually did the project as much as 5 weeks earlier than other classes.
Linda Johns, Mohegan Lake
, NY
2/22
     My students loved the project.  They loved the book, and we got
to hear some very descriptive language.
     The free form poetry gave us an opportunity to really pay attention to how the author used words.  By doing a verb poem, an adjective poem, and a descriptive poem of what the snow does and what it looks like, we were able to pay attention to how these words can add to visual images you can make.
     As a teacher I really enjoyed having the opportunity to review verbs
and adjectives, combine the project with a unit I was already integrating, and a chance to show the children what free form poetry could look and sound like.
     The book we used, White Snow Bright Snow, was copyrighted in
1964 - wow - and it is still relevant today!  That blew their minds. ;-)
     Thank you so much for doing this project.  I hope it doesn't get old for
you.     We have new students every year, and the projects are also a GREAT
resource of ideas.  Teacher can be so creative!  Thanks again for including us.

Ada Swanson, Smith Road El., North Syracuse, NY
2/22
I just wanted to thank you for hosting the winter poetry project.  I can't
imagine all of the work involved!  My class enjoyed writing their winter
senses poems, then compiling a class composite poem.  They especially
enjoyed seeing their work online, and the work of other classes.  This was
our first internet project and now we're looking for another!  Thank you
again for all that you do!

Dolores Foltz, East Waterboro, Maine
 
2/19
Hi Marci,
I loved the project. The kids enjoyed it, too. Poetry writing is something
I don't always do enough of, so this was a great incentive. Thank you again
for all your work.
Nancy Golubic, Gr. 1, Boardman, Ohio
2/19
Just wanted to let you know my comments on this great project.  I personally loved the easy way you could participate in this project without feeling overwhelmed!  We write poems often in our class and it was great to post it on the Internet for all to read in a concise, organized manner that your website is set up as...  the students had a great time reading all of the winter poems, especially the Snowflake Bentley ones to see how our poem compared to others.  It also incorporated a great geography mini-lesson on why some students don't see snow and how they view winter.  Lots of great discussions came from this one project.  You do an amazing job of compiling and keeping track of who is doing what...  How do you do it all?  Anyway, thank you for letting us participate and also helping us teachers out there to incorporate technology seamlessly into our curriculum... the way it should be!

Catherine Inzer, Gr. 1-2, Foster, Rhode Island
2/19
We enjoyed taking part in your winter project.  It inspired us to write great winter poems.  We had fun sharing lots of winter stories.  We also enjoyed checking out the site and reading the poems written by other classes across the USA and Canada!  Thanks so much for hosting all of us!  Sincerely,
Ellen Singsank and Gr. 2 Class, Buffalo Grove, IL
2/19
Thanks so much for a great project!  This was my first internet project with my class and I even got my entire grade level involved!  Some of us are a  little scared or uncertain about our computer skills but this project was something we were doing in our class anyway and it was so easy to get involved in.  Our children were especially excited to see the other first grade class projects in our school and were sooo excited to read projects from other states and other grade levels.  We are definitely interested in any up coming projects, so please keep me posted!
  Thanks,
Laura Betz, Grade 1, Ben Franklin School, Shrub Oak,
NY
2/18
Hey there! My class really enjoyed working on the poetry project. They thought it was great seeing their work online. They really liked reading the poetry by the other classes, and even asked about getting some of the winter books for our classroom library. I guess if a project can get kids excited about both technology and reading, that is a huge success. Hats and mittens off to you from snowy...and I MEAN SNOWY New Jersey! I am always interested in new projects, so keep me posted!

Lori Vig, Grade 2, West Caldwell, NJ
2/18
We really enjoyed doing your internet project. It was the first one that my class has done this year. This was the first time this class has written poetry this year, too.   Thanks so much for hosting this project. It has been fun to read all of the other poems and to see all of the different "winter" books that people have read!

Judy Bonzer, Grade 1, Marshalltown, Iowa
2/17
Thanks so much for the poetry project. This is my first year in
third grade, and this was our first foray into internet projects. We
enjoyed everything about it - reading the book, writing the poem, seeing our work in print, and, the simplicity! Now that our appetites have been whetted, I am trolling around for other internet projects in which we could participate. Thanks for opening this door for us!

Joan Wittman, Grade 3, Varysburg, NY
2/17  
Hi there! My class really enjoyed being a part of the project. We are a grade one class at a very technological school. We were excited to share our poem with our "Reading Buddies" on-line! We also sent home the link in our class and school newsletters so that others could read our poem. We wrote the poem as a class (shared writing ) but then we all did our own cinquains and they are so amazing!! I am really impressed with my grade one poets! Thank you so much for providing this exciting opportunity and we will be looking forward to participating in future internet projects!

Melissa Pearson, Churchill Meadows P.S.Mississauga, Ontario Canada
2/17/03
This project was an excellent idea! I teach first grade at the Martha B. Day School.This was an excellent opportunity to introduce writing a name poem. We read many books on snow and used the new language (along with our imaginations) to write our poem. The exciting part was reading it on the internet! I sent the address home to all the parents! If you continue to do this next year you can count on my class to participate again! Thank you for this opportunity!
Renee Meich, first grade teacher, Bloomingdale, NJ
2/16/03
    
How I have enjoyed participating in Marci Mc Gowan's projects!   This is the third project I have participated in since last spring.  In addition to choosing excellent ideas to encourage and interest the children, Marci is super at organizing and posting the many creations of the students.  This has encouraged me to try even more Internet projects for my class and to share them with not only my students and their parents, but also fellow teachers.  I will be coming back again and again.
     Thanks again for creating projects that allow us as teachers and students to reach beyond ourselves and move toward our potential.

Sandy Huling  Mc Kee Elementary, Oakdale, PA
http://www.westallegheny.k12.pa.us/mckee
2/16/03
     There is a good reason that I am a veteran of Mrs. McGowan's projects - they're simply wonderful!!!  This, like all Marci's projects, takes an idea that is an integral part of everyone's classroom - in this case, reading a book with a winter theme - and let's people run with it. The follow-up of collaborative poetry is perfect - poetry is part of every state's standards and the collaborative piece allows the teacher to expose children to this genre in a very easy, doable manner.
     I am always amazed at the diversity and creativity of the participants' work. Because of this, I strive to challenge myself and my students to think "out of the box." Our work for this project had my children writing Chinese calligraphy in the snow and loving every minute of it!! The simple collaborative poem we wrote took on another dimension as the children chose a part of it to illustrate in our new Computer Lab using Kidpix.
     Marci's projects always inspire me to be the best I can be as a teacher, and when a teacher is at her best, that is what she gets from her students. Simply put, her projects are the foundation for many "Best Practices" - just what we all want in the classroom.

Lanise Jacoby
Please take a peek into the Window to Our World
http://www.geocities.com/ljacoby_2000/window.html
 
2/16/03
Marci:  My class and I always enjoy your projects. Joining the Winter Project makes me use computer collaboration which the students need to be exposed. I know I don't read aloud enough and this project requires reading aloud. I like the different forms of poetry shown in the project and try to use a different kind each time. Thanks for offering such a simple and educational project that is also fun for the students.
Pamela Spann, Daingerfield,TX

2/15/03
Thanks for hosting another Online Poetry Project this year. I have participated in several of your projects and am always amazed at the creative and professional way you display each individual's contributions to your project. I always end up integrating several subject areas by participating in your projects. The Read a Winter Book, Write a Winter Poem project involved reading, writing, art and technology in a very creative way. The students enjoyed writing winter poems and reading the poetry that has been submitted by the other classes. I am sure the site will be visited by thousands and they will enjoy reading the poetry also. Thanks again for taking the time to host the project and for the beautiful job you have done displaying the work. I will be first in line when you announce your next online project. Enjoy the rest of the winter and may spring come earlier than expected!

Debbie Coats
Second grade teacher, Berlin, Wisconsin
 

2/15/03
This was a great project because I was able to tie many of our state's standards to it and it was of reasonable length. It helped me meet requirements of our district ELA curriculum where I am responsible for a particular type of poetry. Thank you for organizing it and giving of your personal time.
Susan Biltucci, Grade 3, Ilion, NY
2/15/03
Thank you so much for hosting the winter poetry project.  My first graders enjoyed it so much and did such a nice job with it.  This is our second year participating in your project and I hope you will be doing it again next year!  Sign us up if you do!   Again, we appreciate your hard work!
Judi Robertson,
South Sioux City, Nebraska
2/15/03
     My class and I loved doing the Read a Winter Book. . . .Write a Winter Poem.  For many of the students, this was an introduction to poetry writing and they were fascinated by the process we used to create our Acrostic Poem for Snow Riders (brainstroming wordbanks using the beautiful language from the story, then using the words to spark ideas for writing about the mental images created when we read the story). Because we now have the wonderful webpage that you have provided, we will be continuing our poetry writing this year using the project page as "real world" examples of the types of poetry we can write.
     We are also using the webpage as a reading activity. My students love it when I display the poems on our "big screen.". The poetry examples are fun to read and the books that were used as springboards are many of the same ones we know and have enjoyed reading. The students are making wonderful, meaningful connections as we read the poems that the other classes have so beautifully written.
     I'm looking forward to the transfer of the reading and modeling and writing showing up in Writing Workshop as my students experiment with writing poems as a format-of-choice.
     Thank you everyone for the wonderful poems that your classes have written. 
     Thank you Mrs. McGowan for hosting this project and for providing the "world wide web" with a great resource of poetry writing models.
Julie Filer/1/WA
2/15/03
My students love to see their work online.  They are amazed that other children in places where we get postcards from have poems online too.  It is fun to see the same people participating!  We call it "going on a trip".  they love to see what other classrooms are doing and to check mail from people sending us mail through your site.  Thanks for doing this for us.
Libby
Rhoden, Pasadena,TX
2/06
Thanks for sponsoring this project - we had a lot of fun (and learned a lot!).  
  Carole Underwood, Baton Rouge, LA
2/04
The poem was a good introduction for rhyme and counting syllables.
The class has browsed the project website and enjoyed all the poems.
They liked "The Black Snowman" from Newark, NJ. Thank you for having us and we will check in again soon.

Yours in learning, Patti Beaudry, Cadotte Lake, Alberta, Canada
2/03
What a wonderful experience this has been. I am very pleased with the process and the product. Thank you for your motivation :)

Kathy Rowland, Poulsbo,WA
http://www.nksd.wednet.edu/schools/pearson/staff/krowland/
2/03
This was our first experience with writing an acrostic poem, and boy did we have fun!

Dina Peters, Mohegan Lake, NY
1/23
Thank you for organizing this terrific project! We have been enjoying
reading the poems from other classes.

Laura Trapp in Helena, Montana where we finally have some wonderful snow!!     
1/23/03     
We had fun being a part of your poetry project. Thanks for organizing such a great collaborative writing project. We have enjoyed the poems which have been posted thus far and look forward to reading more!

Kirsten Davis, 2nd Grade, Pittsburgh, PA

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